Good
The animation in this was great. the only thing I got anoyed by were the voices.
Good
The animation in this was great. the only thing I got anoyed by were the voices.
Thanks :P That happens, we know.
Wow man
You have a very unique style. I love the depth of field tricks like the rack focus. The music was amazing. It kept me glued for the whole flash. My only suggestion is next time try to have more of a plot. A great story accompanied by your style would be something really badass. If you ever need a voice actor for your stuff shoot me a message.
Thanks a lot man. Well we were kinda rushed getting through, but what we were originally shooting for was a mad man looking like he is building frankenstein then it turns out to be santa building a snowman. But yeah a voice actor would be great im actually going to be needing one here in a bit. Im doing a short with a conversation between two people.
If you ever need any help just hit me up
You know what.
I normally don't like alot of these sprite submissions but this one isn't half bad. You have a lot of potential to make something that could be badass. If I can offer any advice it would be to put an orriginal story into your next one. obviously, look at Alvin Earthworms Super Mario Bros. Z series for some good inspiration.
-Jon
appsro.com
I really appreciate the advice. But the thing is, is that this was just a random fight, which is why I didn't include any type of story lol. This is an old vid, so I'm actually alot better in flash than what was reflected in this vid. So my next vid will definitely be better. Thanks again.
Amazing
I just watched the whole series and it's going on my favorites.
thanks
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